tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8671722624456112019.post1109052669828718535..comments2024-01-08T18:47:44.683+00:00Comments on A London Fishmonger: Skating on Thin Ice - The Plight of our skates and raysMChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04496090626741251386noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8671722624456112019.post-71720508544506167272012-03-29T18:28:49.307+01:002012-03-29T18:28:49.307+01:00Thanks for your positive comments Jon. I am actual...Thanks for your positive comments Jon. I am actually in the process of re-writing this piece for a customer with the addition of all the species and red list and fish list ratings. when I have finished I will add segments to the blog so it reads much clearer.A London Fishmongerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18086387017523765700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8671722624456112019.post-79981150303084316802012-03-29T17:12:34.516+01:002012-03-29T17:12:34.516+01:00Hi there,
I like this blog. I Like the way you p...Hi there, <br /><br />I like this blog. I Like the way you point out the difficulties in assertaining catch data, and I like the way you have given the specific names of the fish that are at risk and those that are not.<br /><br />One thing I did notice was that the paragraphs are quite long. break this up a bit more and it will improve its readability. Another thing I noticed was that you give tons of information about skates at the beginning but you don't mention their precarious situation. I recommend you make the point that many species of skate are on the IUCN endangered list and others are given tentative statuses. <br /><br />Over all I think it's a great blog and it really shows that you know what you are talking about. Its nice to see someone with your background talking about this subject. It flows nicely too. <br /><br />I would like to attach it to a few other sites to capture an audience that needs it so if you could re-look at it and maybe have a bit of a muck around with the spacing and the message then I would love to use your link if that's ok.<br /><br />Cheers<br /><br />Jon<br />Marine EcologistJonhttp://www.go-scuba-dive.comnoreply@blogger.com